Proposal for Storyboard

This is my proposal for my storyboard idea

I chose Fresh Juice Blender as the product for my storyboard as I find it efficient to use due to its portable and silent feature and how it's not time-consuming because you don't need to wait for your fruits and vegetables to blend before going to work. Instead, you just need to put the desired ingredients, blend on the go, bring it to work and not disturb other people as you blender and not miss breakfast, and for that reason, workers from middle to high-income earners are my target audience since their priority may be mainly their fast-paced and undisturbed work instead of maintaining their health. 

The idea I have is to portray 2 business managers (man and woman wearing suits) that works in the same company coincidentally meeting in the library where it starts with the man coming into the library with a huge blender on goes to a corner to blend his fruits and it cuts to the woman shushing him and he blenders again and it repeats thrice until she's frustrated. However the last time, everyone is frustrated and throws their books at him and he gets knocked by one and falls to the ground, mixed with all the books. It then cuts the the scene where the woman is back sitting in her table, peacefully reading with her Fresh Juice Blender in the side. 

After discussing with my teacher, my idea changed to:

The idea I have is to portray 2 business managers (man and woman wearing suits) that works in the same company in a business meeting where it starts with the man using the blender while other coworkers are having discussions. It cuts to the woman shushing him (the fresh juice blender already beside her but still blurred) and he says sorry but blenders again and it repeats thrice until she's frustrated. However the last time, everyone is frustrated and throws their notebooks at him and he gets knocked by one and falls to the ground, mixed with all the books. It then cuts the the scene where there's calming music playing and the woman (the other manager) is back sitting in her table while the Fresh Juice blender is already running, turns off her Fresh Juice Blender, and drinks from it while brainstorming. 

Self-reflection

Since making a proposal requires creating the specific idea of the storyboard, I can use it to start brainstorming the scenes I can make to portray it. This helps me to not get sidetracked and make scenes that gradually trails off the main idea that I have and avoids an ending that either doesn't make sense, or doesn't correlate to the original idea. Not only that, by making a proposal and giving it to my teacher, I can gain feedbacks to what I should change in order to improve it and have suggestions of other possible ideas that may attract the target audience better.